|Reviews for My Billionaire Boyfriend slash Protectee|
| LeviathanArmy48 1/11/13 . chapter 3
his is a very interesting read, and I would love for the story to continue, I do think you might want to review your work and fix spelling errors, and any grammatical things you think might be needed
| LeviathanArmy48 1/11/13 . chapter 1
hmm, Director D, the name reminds me of Mr. D. or Dionysius in Rick Riordens book series "Percy Jackson and the Olympians.
when you said "Whait, mom dad you knew about this and you didn't tell me?" the H does not need to be there, and there needs to be some sort of punctuation between :mom" and "dad" just to get the pause that I would imagine you wanted to be right in between there.
| Nancy 11/14/12 . chapter 3
I can't wait for more! I like the story a lot! _