Very interesting and alluring :) xx

Wow, just...wow. Your writing has amazed me once again! The descriptions were breathtaking. The way you wrote of outer beauty as if they were feathers. I loved that comparison. I especially loved the way you described the wonders of the girl's mind and personality.
The feathers are not what really matters, it's what's inside. And even i someone is gray on the outside but gloriously colorful on the inside, that inner beauty radiates out and makes that person even more beautiful than the people who are colorful on the outside but gray on the inside.
Again, the only thing I can really say is...WOW!