wow. this sure is interesting but i think it would be better if you increase the chapter length a bit. as for continuing...you should definitely continue :)

This is written quite well and the way that you had written in the child and how he wanted his bear to sleep with her was REALLY RATHER SWEET. Thank you for sharing this.

This is written quite well and I am interested in reading this. Thank you for sharing this.

Yes! You should continue! Very wonderful job (:

This is quite well written and I was completely into reading this. You are very good at writing the emotions of your characters in this story. Thank you for sharing this.