Ah, this was absolutely amazing! Made me a bit teary eyes too, it's a shame people can't see themselves as perfect as they are.

Wow, I was able to empathize with this girl in the story. The description is wonderful. The girl's emotions were captured well. I liked it :)

Oh wow, this is an amazing story! The details are very good and the metaphors are perfect. It is very realistic. Really good work!