" "Isn't it the truth?" I persist. " Persist should be persisted because you are writing in past tense instead of present tense. That is all for edits!

SUSPICIONS CONFIRMED! SUCCESS! Wait, should I be happy about that? 'Cause you know, her world got shattered... Nah, I'm decided to be happy about it anyway. Just means possible Derek-Micky cuddle cry fun times. School has ruined my thought process... I'm sorry. XD

Anyway, Update when you can!
WritingKnightmare

Well...I can't say I didn't see it coming. But it was still really cool, and sad, and dramatic. I thought Derek was gonna catch her with Brian and think she was cheating, but it's a good thing he didn't, cuz I might've cried if that happened. I love this story so freaking much, update soon!

OMG i hate Justin so much he such a dick although I can understand why he wants to look out for his best friend and all. I feel horrible for Micky though. Finding that out is horrible and not to mention from a complete stranger, although i totally knew that her mom had an affair with derek's dad and i know people just say that but i definitely had an inkling! As usual wonderful chapter and i can't wait to see what the fallout from this big relevation is!

I KNEW IT!
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Can't wait for the next one!
Much love,
Sarah
A.k.a. blondiej1

O.O ahhhh Brian

OMG FINALLY THE CHAPTER I HAVE BEEEN WAITING FOR YAY! and you didn't disappoint! i think you handled their awkwardness super well and made their big relevation of feeling super realistic cause i was reading it and i was like yup been there, done that, know exactly what that feels like! So way to go you're amazing! 3 :) But how could you just end there!? can't wait for the next chapter and good luck at school!

Aw, shit, not Brian. I don't want him there! Make him go AWAY! He's gonna ruin the loveliness isn't he? I can feel it, he's gonna ruin it all and then somebody better friggin' slap him silly or I will figure out away to get inside this story so that I can do it myself. Wow. That sounded absolutely nuts. I apologize. This story's sooooooooo good and I get really giddy every time you update, so you should do that soon, you know?

OH MY GOSH HE FINALLY KISSED HER! I've been waiting for this moment, and it's finally here! :D AHHHH THEY'RE JUST SO CUTE TOGETHER! x)

Oh no, but then Brian is there as well. :/ Hmm... I'm sensing drama coming up here. I can't wait to find out about what's going to happen next. :))

Anyways, great update as usual! I hope you post a new chapter soon! ;)

-ChocolateCoveredCheetos

"I hesitated before bobbing my head bobbed up and down." take out whichever form of 'bobbed' you want and it will make sense. That's the only typo I saw.

Oh my god! I think I reacted to the kiss much like Micky did. Except lying down. If that works... It was a great chapter! Now I'm wondering what Brian wants, and if my suspicions about Micky's mom are true. I still want an Avery spin-off, as I mentioned before.

Anyway, ahhh school. I know how you feel. Update when you can! But hopefully soon!
WritingKnightmare

First of all i hope your auditions went well and personally i would love a spin-off about Avery, she is such an interesting character it would be awesome to get a deeper look into her character. BUT, this chapter. for starters, JOHN! He is my new favorite character hands down, i'm gonna be sad when he goes :( Legit he made me laugh so much because he reminds me of one of my friends! I'm still super curious about her mom and that whole mystery and homecoming sounds like it'll be VERY interesting, can't wait. honestly i hate waiting for chapters and i check everyday even though i know you won't update early ahah! so keep going i'm so excited!

Good thing I checked this.. I wouldn't have been able to read te story otherwise .. Good chapter :)

totally great chapter :) i love avery and john really was a breath of fresh air...i wish he would be in the story more cant he move from los angeles too hahahaha, excited for the next update :)

DO A SPINOFF ON AVERY! I friggin' love that girl. And I bet it was a different kind of chemistry Derek and Avery were talking about *wink wink* Yeah...I have no life. But anyways, love this story so friggin' much, update soon pleeeeeeeeaaaaase!

First things first, while I still remember(damn iPod): after the page break, Micky "had to complaints, at all", there was one part where I think it was John who stopped, and you forgot the 's' in "stopped and you called John Justin 3 or 4 times. All after the page break.

Other than that, great chapter. I really like John's character. He's pretty awesome. And yes, I would like an Avery spin off. That'd be pretty awesome, and we'd get to know that huge secret that Avery's hiding.

So, yeah, update soon.
WritingKnightmaew

I love Derek, I think he can be romantic when he wants to be (: Are you updating today? It's supposed to be today..