| Reviews for When I See You, Tess |
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HenryDavid 4/11/13 . chapter 1A mistake is only a mistake if you don't learn and grow from it. And that can only happen if you admit that you messed up; and apologize to her. I think you've done it, Hermie. It sounds like you haven't seen her for a while; I would consider getting in touch with her. Thanks ;) |
LucienMaier 3/14/13 . chapter 1Great testament to friendship. I love the great snip its from your adventures together. well done |
KaylaHeart 3/3/13 . chapter 1Aw, this is both sad and sweet. How did it turn out? |
Faded-Whisper 1/26/13 . chapter 1Hey I just came to return a review but which, usually, I'll be honest; I do in the most off-hand way but this really touched me. Not only is your writing style brutally simple and honest, but it portrays emotions perfectly and I was actually very touched. Hope to see another sample of writing up soon about how things are okay between you guys now :) |
LovelySocks 1/25/13 . chapter 1This reminds me so much of me and my best friend it's scary. What an amazing way to express your feelings, especially because you're so dang good at it. All the little details, the organization, the language, mood, tone. You are my English teacher's dream. |
Hermione's Harmony 1/2/13 . chapter 1Hiya! Hermie, this made me want to cry. It was a beautiful way of portraying your feelings into text. Your almost inadvertent style, the way that you indirectly flow all of your guilt into these words, is just fantastic. I can see from this that you are a very meaningful, thoughtful friend. And friends always make mistakes. It won't be your first, and it won't be your last. The way we deal with these mistakes and recover from them is what matters. I also loved how you kept up a flow of humour throughout this piece, with writing in mind. It wasn't continuously down-hearted and depleted, but full of a spirit that can only come from memories. This was lovely! Well done! |
MichelleEA 12/23/12 . chapter 1That was so true, and very beautiful. That's exactly how I feel about the girls who go to my school- stuckup snobs! |
Fizzy Bath Bomb 12/19/12 . chapter 1true : D |
DarkAngelGal 11/3/12 . chapter 1Awww...this is so sweet! I'm glad u finally came to ur senses! It's not about how many ppl u hang with but about the types of ppl u hang with! Plus, in my opinon, it's better to have a true friend than no friend at all! Anyway, thanks for sharing! -DarkAngelGal |
Flaming Sun of Illusions 9/30/12 . chapter 1That story really connects with me. I have done the same thing with my friends, and I really regret it. I love the way you put my feelings into words... Great story! |
Queen in the North 9/29/12 . chapter 1you have a very wonderful friend :) sometimes we just need someone who can be weird with us. Kudos to you for apologizing and admitting your mistake. These days, people rarely do that. :) |
MagicWords 9/16/12 . chapter 1Good work, all the examples show just how good of friends you two were. I'm glad that things were reconciled. |
the4thera 9/8/12 . chapter 1Love your sense of humour: so light like many a friend I know! Great work keep at it! |
blueagle246 9/8/12 . chapter 1Sounds like a very good friend. |
islandsun 8/24/12 . chapter 1That sounds like a good friend. |