|Reviews for i break my heart around this|
| the-lovely-anomaly 8/13/12 . chapter 1
"the warm rush of winter in my hips-
these greedy fingertips clutch at
Brilliant, hard-hitting poem.
| Love A Mysterious Thing 7/26/12 . chapter 1
Ouch. I couldn't help saying that. this was painful and the ending was like being splashed by freezing water. Great write.
| electrical moon 7/23/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem! I particularly love 'warm rush of winter in my hips' and 'spine-snapping pearls'. You've got really gorgeous imagery and I love the formatting.
| alexithymic 7/22/12 . chapter 1
| Kamon24121 7/22/12 . chapter 1
Ugh, I hate that.. :c Great poem though! :)