|Reviews for In Fear Of The Gun|
| Wonder46 7/24/12 . chapter 1
So vivid. Internal pain is the worst kind. Great poem!
| DarkInkyDreamer 7/23/12 . chapter 1
A very clever comparison, I love how you have set this out using repetition and emotive language to really build up to the ending and final realisation.
I think there should be a question mark at the end of 'Is live life like there's a gun pressed to her head'
| Purplemonkey123 7/22/12 . chapter 1
Beautifully written i love the way it was worded good job!