Heh heh. Love the ending. Made me smile :)

Have to be honest, I expected something a little different to this.
However this was fun to read.
In both chapters you have a few wording issues which make your sentences hard to understand but other than that this was a nice little piece!

Cool. Very unique idea, l look foward to your other chapters.

Haha! Very original and funny! Good job! Keep writing :)