very well thought out, i really like it

Nice poem chica

Another nice one- great message, very true. I think I'm one of those people sometimes. Thanks :)

I like it! Great rhythm and rhyme. And it's too true. It's good to see people who actually realize that life should be enjoyed and it's just too short. I really enjoy all of your works, Kittioto! Keep writing cuz you rock! Ja ne!

Very true. That one made me sit up and blink guiltily, because all-too-often I concentrate on the bad, rather than the good. You can't have a sunrise without having the night before it, right?

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! WAH WAH WAH! TOO PRETTY! WAAAAAAAAAY TOO PRETTY! MEGGY YOU ARE *TOO* GOOD! Sobs And this is SO true! I need to read some of these to my mom sometime, actually no... she would say you are disturbed... that's just the way she is Sticks out tongue -Maully

i love the last line. its really good

I know exactly what you mean. I love rain. A thunderstorm is a beautiful thing. My friends think that's morbid, but it's true... why CAN'T a thunderstorm be beautiful? Enjoy life while it's here, and that should include those rainy moments.