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| Reviews for Scrap Metal |
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   Eyes Like Blue Plastic 5/17/13 . chapter 5I know I'm not usually a critiquer, but I think what makes this less good than most of your work is that the images feel forced and don't quite flow as well as your writing normally does |
| Eyes Like Blue Plastic 5/17/13 . chapter 4 :'( |
| Eyes Like Blue Plastic 5/17/13 . chapter 3 Ahhhhhhhhhh I know where this went |
| Eyes Like Blue Plastic 5/17/13 . chapter 2 I like this. Why no stand alone? |
| Guest 9/20/12 . chapter 4 nice |
