Wow this was really cool! You could take it farther if you wanted to and turn it into a story? Just a thought haha :)
Keep writing, Meggie

I love the format of the story and the way it flowed from line to line. you might just need to look at this line: "Gone with the life he had once had" it might be changed to, "Goine with the life he once had." just a thought. Well done.