Hmm... I liked this, though I felt if you were to rewrite this now it would be better... (just my opinion) Continue to write. :)

This is very instereasting.

Your song help me a lot. I actuly feel the sime way for some time now and i thought that i'm the onely one.

you know who i am...and im really sorry you feel this way...and i wish i could change that. but i dont know how.

No joke, that WAS deep. Good job.

This makes tears swell in my eyes. It's so deep, and shows so much. Wonderful...

"don't" should be "doesn't" and the last line was unneeded repetition. Other than that, it was a pretty okay poem. It's hard to do a poem that hasn't been done 200 times before, especially on a site like this. Unfortunately, you have to find a *very* original way to play the depression card for it to be good. Keep trying, I think you have the potential to be an awesome poet.
Have a nice one.
Regards, Claire

Wow, this is amazing! I love the imagery you use here and how deep this is. I know how much pain these "friends" cause you and I can see it on an even deeper level when I read this. Like the others, I'd love to hear this with the music. Maybe you'll show me soon ;D I loved your metaphors and similes and just everything about this... Amazing job, keep writing!

i'd like to actually hear this, but i enjoyed reading it too i began to read with a tune in mind and the lyrics were very strong too, good job!

Wow.. I would absolutely LOVE to hear this as an actual song. Amazing lyrics, I can really connect emotionally with these and that takes skill on behalf of the writer so great job! Beautifully written and evokes lots of emotion.. Two thumbs up