|Reviews for Wounded|
| Naver 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Hmm... I liked this, though I felt if you were to rewrite this now it would be better... (just my opinion) Continue to write. :)
| Guest 10/1/12 . chapter 1
This is very instereasting.
| Guest 8/2/12 . chapter 1
Your song help me a lot. I actuly feel the sime way for some time now and i thought that i'm the onely one.
| dovesgirl91 7/26/12 . chapter 1
you know who i am...and im really sorry you feel this way...and i wish i could change that. but i dont know how.
| Stonehartdreamer 7/24/12 . chapter 1
No joke, that WAS deep. Good job.
| Stonehartdreamer27 7/25/12 . chapter 1
This makes tears swell in my eyes. It's so deep, and shows so much. Wonderful...
| Claire Gerdes 7/24/12 . chapter 1
"don't" should be "doesn't" and the last line was unneeded repetition. Other than that, it was a pretty okay poem. It's hard to do a poem that hasn't been done 200 times before, especially on a site like this. Unfortunately, you have to find a *very* original way to play the depression card for it to be good. Keep trying, I think you have the potential to be an awesome poet.
Have a nice one.
| swingdancer23 7/24/12 . chapter 1
Wow, this is amazing! I love the imagery you use here and how deep this is. I know how much pain these "friends" cause you and I can see it on an even deeper level when I read this. Like the others, I'd love to hear this with the music. Maybe you'll show me soon ;D I loved your metaphors and similes and just everything about this... Amazing job, keep writing!
| Beth Brooks 7/24/12 . chapter 1
i'd like to actually hear this, but i enjoyed reading it too i began to read with a tune in mind and the lyrics were very strong too, good job!
| Laila14 7/24/12 . chapter 1
Wow.. I would absolutely LOVE to hear this as an actual song. Amazing lyrics, I can really connect emotionally with these and that takes skill on behalf of the writer so great job! Beautifully written and evokes lots of emotion.. Two thumbs up