Incredible work. This is a beautiful piece. I love the connection you made with not facing your troubles and running in the rain in vain. I also loved the rhyming and you chose words that made the piece seem melodic in a way. A wonderful piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Truly breathtaking and I loved it. Keep up the excellent work. :)

-Shauni

wow that is really deep with emotions

Amaizng! The wording of your poetry always stands out in a unique way. Keep it up :D

I love it. Everything about it, I'm serious. This is an amazing writng piece, I loved it. Bravo, this is amazing3x. :)