As usual, very good! :)

Good poem. My only problem is that if I didn't have the "religion" tag as a reference, I would have no idea what this was about. Even with it, I'm still not sure I get it. Now, since it's poetry I can't be to judgmental on that aspect, but it'd be nice if it were a bit more..clear?
Anyways, have a nice day.
regards, Claire