|Reviews for They Took My Smile Away|
| Bushwah 8/1/12 . chapter 1
Find others, talk to them about what you want to talk about.
Somewhere, you will find friends again.
| a discordant combination 7/28/12 . chapter 1
It's ever so short, but still.
The last two lines are my favourite of the whole thing. I think those lines work well together, they are simple and yet portray a lot of emotion, just the simple "they took my smile away" is very emotive because they have taken a part of you, forced it away from you. I think in places through out the piece you could improve on your description, but overall it's well written.