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That sounds like a imaginative story!

They both wanted to kill their teacher. Classic. A couple spelling errors here and there but the characters are interesting enough to keep my interest piqued. So see you next chapter.

Chapter 5 and Chapter 6 are the same chapter.

Not a bad read. I'm kinda confused though. Can no one else see the two Wind Masters with them? I'm getting this feeling that tells me Matt is more skilled at using the wind, but Maya may actually become more powerful than him with it.

Going where they didn't want to go? And can't Matt appreciate that his sister cares enough about him?

Ooh, secret identity. Now that's interesting. The brother didn't seem to mind being called Butter this chapter. And what's with the leap from part 1 to part 3?

Interesting read. That gang leader really makes me mad.

I really like Maya and her brothers relationship it's so cute

These chapters are cut up too much try and bring them together so as to not lose the reader

Great start :)