Amazing chapter. This story is all so original. I LOVE it!

If I am correct, Chime is the nararrator- I can't spell. But anyway- you keep switching between first and third POV. Other than that, I really like this story

I like this. It's very good. Can't wait to see what you do!

When you said that no one was reading it I wasn't expecting THIS! This is really, REALLY good! I like it :D
I just noticed a few mistakes like punctuation and misspellings but it's nothing serious.
Oooh, you got me so curious as to what happens next! I wanna know!
Ciao, A-chan