|Reviews for My Best Friends are Monsters?|
| Miles-tails-prowler 8/4/12 . chapter 2
It's good. Be interesting to see how it turns out.
| Anxious Axolotl 7/29/12 . chapter 1
It wasn't sucky at all!
At first Danny seemed really relatable (I don't like moving either), but the she seems to be come indifferent about everything after the first paragraph. Like the detail about the colours of their rooms, I got a good mental picture from the house because you described it so well, but I didn't really get a vibe of how Danny and the other members of her family felt about their new house.
On the grammatical front, there were a few spelling errors and don't forget to start a new line for every turn of dialogue, it really does wonders for the formatting and make it look so much more appealing.
Update soon, hope the next chapter is a bit longer. Good luck!
PS - I think 'supernatural' is the right genre for this, unless the monsters are aliens or something.