I would like to vote this chapter as my favourite. There are tenderness in it written all over their action.

The little Russel definitely has impact on me, the older ones hasn't yet. But i shall read more to find out..

WOW.. I am speechless. I never thought you could convey such emotion, passion, plot, everything into such a short story. I am in love. You are an amazing writer and I am overjoyed that you wrote this. It was simply breath taking. Every moment was memorable. Loved it :3

well, i dont know what to say...but i marked this story as favorite so... yeah

This story was gorgeous and absolutely amazing. It was well written and a lovely dark romance. I enjoyed every page turning second. I also love the realistic nature of it and felt sympathetic to the characters. I would adore reading more. To see what forever holds for those two. But thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this.

Rae Ann

AH! This is so beautifully poignant! Oh I love it! Thank you for writing and posting such a fantastic piece! It's so beautiful, I don't even know where to start!

The structure, for one, is perfect, and executed so very brilliantly, with the flashbacks that give a sense of nostalgia and history... very well done. I love how simple and concise you made it; definitely a very hard thing for people to do, I think, without alienating the audience, but you did it superbly! I also love the tone and the whole feel of the piece. The whole story had a grounded and gritty, yet fantastic feel to it.

Your writing is so smooth and the flow is so seamless, it was really enjoyable to read! And I some of Klaus' descriptions of Russel just made me *shudder* in my seat as I read them, they were so eloquent! Your ability to convey emotion and tone and feeling with your diction and syntax is marvelous!

AH! And I love Klaus and Russel! Their whole story feels so tragically romantic! Loyalty, in my opinion, is of the most important quality a person can have, and the loyalty that Klaus and Russel have for one another is so heartbreakingly beautiful. I loved it. So much. Well done, and thank you!

This is kind of sick... I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! This is so so good! I actually just... wowwww!
Russell and Klaus are so amazing and wonderful. I wasn't expecting all the dark shit but, I like it... well, I think it makes a good story anyway. :)
Really good writing... I might read some more of your stories!

Oh man, this is a tiny bit disturbing near the end but very awesome and very realistic. I kept thinking this was going to turn into a paranormal but you had the skill to keep it in reality.
I love the characters and to me it seemed like they could go either good or bad at the end. This is an awesome teen romance. Keep up the great writing.

I truly loved this it was so twisted and dark

It was good, only I think in some instances, your characters were just a teeny bit out of character. Just a little bit.

hmmm... I think I like it. Must keep reading now though I can already see Russell's going to be annoyingly stubborn :P

Wow. This may make me messed up... But I really really like this fic... The intense bond betwen them... Their obsessive, protective love... Their mirrored - sadisticness? Together forever in all things. It's a twisted love story :)

please make a sequel this is the best thing ive ever read.

Really loved the uniqueness of this story.

Well, I love this story. I like the darker side of relationships. I think the ending was odd though.