|Reviews for Indivisible|
| Vallucast 5/23/13 . chapter 4
I would like to vote this chapter as my favourite. There are tenderness in it written all over their action.
| Vallucast 5/23/13 . chapter 2
The little Russel definitely has impact on me, the older ones hasn't yet. But i shall read more to find out..
| LiveLoveRead95 3/25/13 . chapter 7
WOW.. I am speechless. I never thought you could convey such emotion, passion, plot, everything into such a short story. I am in love. You are an amazing writer and I am overjoyed that you wrote this. It was simply breath taking. Every moment was memorable. Loved it :3
| fick dich. oder auch nicht 3/16/13 . chapter 7
well, i dont know what to say...but i marked this story as favorite so... yeah
| RaeAnnLove 12/17/12 . chapter 7
This story was gorgeous and absolutely amazing. It was well written and a lovely dark romance. I enjoyed every page turning second. I also love the realistic nature of it and felt sympathetic to the characters. I would adore reading more. To see what forever holds for those two. But thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this.
| The.Flailing 12/8/12 . chapter 7
AH! This is so beautifully poignant! Oh I love it! Thank you for writing and posting such a fantastic piece! It's so beautiful, I don't even know where to start!
The structure, for one, is perfect, and executed so very brilliantly, with the flashbacks that give a sense of nostalgia and history... very well done. I love how simple and concise you made it; definitely a very hard thing for people to do, I think, without alienating the audience, but you did it superbly! I also love the tone and the whole feel of the piece. The whole story had a grounded and gritty, yet fantastic feel to it.
Your writing is so smooth and the flow is so seamless, it was really enjoyable to read! And I some of Klaus' descriptions of Russel just made me *shudder* in my seat as I read them, they were so eloquent! Your ability to convey emotion and tone and feeling with your diction and syntax is marvelous!
AH! And I love Klaus and Russel! Their whole story feels so tragically romantic! Loyalty, in my opinion, is of the most important quality a person can have, and the loyalty that Klaus and Russel have for one another is so heartbreakingly beautiful. I loved it. So much. Well done, and thank you!
| GrangerDanger333 11/25/12 . chapter 7
This is kind of sick... I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! This is so so good! I actually just... wowwww!
Russell and Klaus are so amazing and wonderful. I wasn't expecting all the dark shit but, I like it... well, I think it makes a good story anyway. :)
Really good writing... I might read some more of your stories!
| Kenny Deheart 11/20/12 . chapter 7
Oh man, this is a tiny bit disturbing near the end but very awesome and very realistic. I kept thinking this was going to turn into a paranormal but you had the skill to keep it in reality.
I love the characters and to me it seemed like they could go either good or bad at the end. This is an awesome teen romance. Keep up the great writing.
| Yeeeaaaa 10/3/12 . chapter 7
I truly loved this it was so twisted and dark
| pterodactylion 9/26/12 . chapter 7
It was good, only I think in some instances, your characters were just a teeny bit out of character. Just a little bit.
| alliciainwonder 9/9/12 . chapter 1
hmmm... I think I like it. Must keep reading now though I can already see Russell's going to be annoyingly stubborn :P
| sapere 9/5/12 . chapter 7
Wow. This may make me messed up... But I really really like this fic... The intense bond betwen them... Their obsessive, protective love... Their mirrored - sadisticness? Together forever in all things. It's a twisted love story :)
| god 8/30/12 . chapter 7
please make a sequel this is the best thing ive ever read.
| Rae Kitano 8/26/12 . chapter 7
Really loved the uniqueness of this story.
| Ney13 8/26/12 . chapter 7
Well, I love this story. I like the darker side of relationships. I think the ending was odd though.