At first, looking at the character description, I was rolling my eyes going "really?" but as I read on, I began to like this story. Great characters, but Jenn seems more fleshed out than Amii. And Amii seems like an unreliable narrator with her knowledge on street racing. Why does Jenn teach her street racing? And how she became an assassin is much too vague! Did she kill the fatso or what? There are some loose ends that need to be tied up and despite this, I enjoyed this story and want to see you expand upon this fic. Right now, it's a very high C at best.