wow Jack sounds like a jerk now wonder if he turned that way because of Violet leaving him for John but can't wait to see what happens when he finds out his daughter is in his house so keep up the amazing work and update soon

Great story so far, its sad how creepy jack got...i wonder what happened between Violet and him...Cant wait for the next chapter! :)

interesting wondering if her dad is going to be his moms husband and so can't wait to see how there first meeting goes when she meets her dad for the first time so update soon

Bella and Ethan needed way more build up then that. If I met someone guy on the bus and he offered me to way with him after not even knowing him, anyone would obviously say no. You should have got them to know each other a bit more.

Nice! It will b as good as the first one. :) awesome stories!

I liked this chapter. :) We finally know the male that Bella is going to go after, huh. :P There were a few grammar mistakes in there, but nothing that had made me drift away from the storyline. Keep up the good work!

Well, this is getting pretty interesting. And I really wanna know how Isabella gets away with it. Or not.

'Til your next update. :)

-Amy Stardust

A-MA-ZING! I NEED TO READ MORE!

luv it ur amazing i want to read more of ur stories

would love to see Jack and John's POV to and loving the start so far can't wait to see what happens when she finds out who her read dad is and to see what happens there so update soon

in the 1st and 2nd chapter you finished with determined. just putting that out there. And I'd like it to stay in the same Pov as now.

Yay, a sequel! So Jack is the actual dad, huh? I can't wait to read more! :)

This is looking good! i hope she finds Jack