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| Reviews for Sapphire in the Dirt |
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  maryssa 9/12/12 . chapter 3 how old is your cousin |
 Princess Adeline 8/3/12 . chapter 14good! |
| Starsinger 8/2/12 . chapter 3 It's "curtsey" not "courtesy". Two different words, two completely different meanings. This is actually quite good, considering the age you're shooting for. |
| AppleCrumble 8/1/12 . chapter 5 :-D |
| AppleCrumble 8/1/12 . chapter 4 Lovely chapter! Keep it up :-D |
| AppleCrumble 8/1/12 . chapter 3 This is really good. You've got some real skill in writing children's stories! This is so good :-D |
| AppleCrumble 8/1/12 . chapter 2 Ahh! The kings died :-( Really brilliant descriptions! Loved it! |
| AppleCrumble 8/1/12 . chapter 1 This is really good. Something I spotted was that on the bit that starts 'She had a famous unique...' you don't mention that time has passed and that she'd grown up as you say in the previous sentence that she's only just been born. Hope this makes sense. I really loved this, it seems to be the perfect bedtime story. :-D Will definitely be reading more! |
| Natari Mirumura 8/1/12 . chapter 3 Lovely chapter. Very descriptive. Keep it up :D |
| Natari Mirumura 7/31/12 . chapter 2 Very nice. Wirtten lovely, and bautifully described. Especially the king's death scene. Amazing job, keep it up :D |
| Natari Mirumura 7/31/12 . chapter 1 This is quite lovely! A true pleasure to read, and written really well. I love the line of the fairy not having a licence to grant a wish. That made me chuckle. Amazing job, keep it up :D |
