Neat, I wonder which girl he will pick. I really liked this chapter. The only part I wasn't crazy about was I think you spent a little too long talking about the paper stick. If possible you should cut that part back a little. Anyways, I'm looking forward to be able to read more soon! :D

nice start...a little confusing I'll admit...
Hope you continue on

Great start. I'd really like to read more! I really wonder how Death fits in. Perhaps the mysterious girl in an angel of death :P