I think it has a brilliant rythmme to it and I absolutely love the little humor that it has such as tea with the mad hatter!

Loved this, it was sad but beautifully written! I loved the reoccurring 'In a land far, far, away.' and how you added the 'away from home' at the end. That concluded the poem perfectly. GREAT PIECE :-D

Absolutely beautiful! We start the journey by seeing this little girl travel all though wonderland and then we get to experience her poignant thoughts towards the end. I loved how little words you used to create explosions of imagery, it was perfect!

This reminds me of my fantasy craze when I was little... It's still going on now XD
Astounding poem.