|Reviews for Vampire|
| professional griefer 9/28/12 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed your descriptions, they were very original and gave a beautiful picture of the girl.
However, this is an extremely short oneshot, and I thought you could have expanded things more. It just seemed too brief.
Also, I really liked your first line. It immediately sucks the reader (or at least me) into the story, because I instantly want to know what the girl's like.
(by the way, what happened to White? I liked that story)
| EPICANGEL5619 8/2/12 . chapter 1
wow how sweet i liked the it alot
| thetabbykitteh 8/2/12 . chapter 1
Wow I loved this. Fantastic job.