wow you weren't lying about dark - eddie

aw...that's so sad. sniff. sniff.

This one was my favorite out of all of them
I really really like dark, depressing themes, so I'm glad I found these poems. (Okay, I don't enjoy others' misery, I just like poetry like this XP)
Anyways, I felt like the rhyme scheme used here was especially clever, and the rhythm was really consistent too.
Hm...I'm scared of my own rage sometimes too...I get angry ALOTALOTALOT. If this poem is personal, I hope that you feel better. Because when you're down in life you can only rise back up.
Number one was really sad and good too, and number four was really...idk but it made me go like "woah...yeah that's pretty much it...that's life"
Really well done!

Wow, this poem is beautifully written and uses rhyme in a great way

that certainly puts things in perspective :)

i really like how the first line was the same question. that was cool

This poem described me in many ways. It is very sad.

I like this poem along with the first. It got to me I want you to know you aren't alone. My life is messed up and I am confronted with the scars on my wrists but no one will understand how I feel inside. So know your not alone and you are a wonderful poet!

wooooah, you're a good poet!

I really like this poem, it was excellently written!
It's a really good poem :)

The poem is really good. Fantastic rhyming fused with a very emotional theme.

This was a depressing poem, but it is true and things like these are happening. I like this poem