Interesting...
Just as I thought, you're a good writer! And the story is definitely drawing me in.

Already enthralling...
WOW!
Not many people are able to do that. I can already tell you're a great writer.

Interesting story wonder what's gonna happen next.

This sounds interesting! I'm enjoying it so far. At first I was pretty skeptical when I saw the length of your prologue, but as they say, quality not quantity. And you wrote that prologue very well. It was to-the-point, well-worded and there was just enough description. I felt that if you'd written anymore, it would be too much.

The first chapter was good, it provided a good introduction, and I am looking forward to seeing both the plot and the characters develop. Keep up the good work!