Okay, so I stand corrected. Things can always get worse. Now she doesn't have her powers? How the heck are they going to get out of this mess now?

Holy shmigles! Will she get her powers back?! Oh! So not healthy for her at the moment. Now THAT is a plot twist.

Oh that sucks! I imagine Kira is freaking out the most considering that is her sister. And then you have the fact that one of them just died, even if she was a horrible horrible person and deserved it. Can things get any worse?

Hey, would you look at that? One of them actually got their door unlocked. Now they just need to get the rest unlocked.

Oooh, Salvatore is back. At least someone is starting to notice Luciana has been gone too long.

Hm, this could get interesting.

Well, you must really have this planned out in your head for you to get two chapters out in a short amount of time. I am impressed.
Secondly, only one spelling error this time, "her knew prison" and that was it.
Can't believe you turned that around with Tabby and Dorian taking Luciana like that. Great twist.
Keep up the good work and look forward to the next chapter.

AWESOME! One of them is free. And I like your frequent updates, though I don't do that much. Keep up the good work, and also, no errors. You don't know how HAPPY I am to be able to read something with no grammar or spelling errors. Look forward to the next chapter.

Ohh...will they ever get out? Geez, your good with cliff hangers. Bitting nails to know what happens next.
Keep up the good work. Look foreward to the next chapter.

Good chapter :) yea see, I think I want to become friends with more boys before I start dating them.. So I don't plan to date any one for a few years or so. :) nvm now.. Its in the past.

12! Freaking 12! I don't need a boyfriend and I didn't want to do I did that! Btw sixth graders are usually 11 or 12... 5th graders are 10 and 11 so Kira is in like, fourth grade?

Lol. Luciana. Yeah, just poke her. On the plus side, with more people with them ,they have more brains to think of an escape plan and more people to help in that escape, right?

Lol. I think I like Shane. He's interesting.

I am sa because I broke up with my boyfriend.. Because I wasn't ready to be attached to someone.. And it's long distance and he has the opportunity to cheat on me.. So he said he was going to commit suicide.. We're friends now.. Good friends.. But good chapter anyways.

Sure hope they get out soon. I kind of feel bad for them all.
Onwards, will Luciana fall for Shane, or will they just be slight friends till they get out? Will Kira defy her half-sister's orders? Who's the woman that got thrown into the cell? And hillarious about her asking Shane if he was going to poke her.
You made no spelling mistakes this time, and no grammar errors either. Give yourself a pat on the back.
I look foreward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.