|Reviews for Dead End: Sequel to Dead Even|
| HalfwayParanoid 8/14/12 . chapter 6
What's next, what's next?
I did not like the fact that you killed her partner. I mean, I just like the original characters than dragging in new ones. But, well, I am still sad on that part.
You had one miss-spelling in the middle of the chapter "I'm woring on it" but that is all I could find.
Enjoyed it and look foreward to the next one. (Still dissappointed in the other guy being dead.)
| bookppl93 8/14/12 . chapter 6
Good chapter.. Sorry I reviewed so late... I had a long day in which I am sort if sad right now :(
| jnl94 8/14/12 . chapter 5
Good luck with that sister.
Ouch, I imagine that hurt just a little bit.
| jnl94 8/14/12 . chapter 4
Oh boy. I can see this going all kinds of bad.
| Moonlttiger 8/14/12 . chapter 5
good luck, and just keep updateing and ill keep reading
| bookppl93 8/13/12 . chapter 5
:( Still sad. Going to mope forever. Good chapter.
| bookppl93 8/8/12 . chapter 4
aha! Smart girl... Wow, I dont know if I like Kira yet... She seems like she could be a handful. Anways,... WTF! I TOLD YOU THAT MORGEN ISNT ALLOWED TO DIE!
| Moonlttiger 8/8/12 . chapter 4
yeah yeah i know they help but must you leave us with yet anoyjer cliff hanger!
| HalfwayParanoid 8/8/12 . chapter 3
Good, and don't be too joyful. I will be off possible after this chapter. Another week to survive through, lol. This was good. Keep it up, no grammar mistakes yet. Look forward to the next chapter.
| jnl94 8/8/12 . chapter 3
You jumped back and forth in tenses in this chapter.
And I can't wait to see what her father has to say for himself.
| jnl94 8/8/12 . chapter 2
Lol, a secret passage Lucy? Really? Because it's always that easy.
| Moonlttiger 8/7/12 . chapter 3
grr i hate when its a cliff hanger! oh well post again soon i cant wait to read her reaction!
| bookppl93 8/7/12 . chapter 3
Woah?! Umm.. He isn't a coward?! Phooey thanks for being that wonderful person who isn't always so cliched.
| Moonlttiger 8/6/12 . chapter 2
yeah a fast update. have more like that i would love that. heehee either way i still love the story!
| bookppl93 8/6/12 . chapter 2
Victor sounds sweet.. But was he flirting?