A lot of "poets" don't understand the rhythm of poetry. There seem to be a lot of people who think that as long as two words rhyme, it doesn't matter if the syllables are wrong.
You are obviously not one of those people.
Your poetry has a natural rhythm and meter that drives home your point effectively, and you split sentences and thoughts into lines to make this work, instead of trying to squeeze a complete thought into each line. This is true poetry: meaningful, story-telling, connectable, clear, and with impeccable timing. I wish I could write poems like this!