Your ideas are presented very strong in this poem. What I would recommend is that you play around with enjambment more to give more meaning to the end-stop lines.

Lovely...

I however, disagree with Dark-Abyss, this was not 'an interesting piece' this is a stunning work of art. Amen! I wish more people thought of them-self's in this respect.

This was definitely an interesting piece, I like it how you emphasised that your book is your own ideals and beliefs, that part I especially liked.