|Reviews for Welcome to the club|
| AoideMythos 4/30/13 . chapter 8
I seriously don't want anybody to get hurt, so fingers crossed!
I don't think Lydia should call policemen stupid in front of them, after all, they don't know what really happened.
Man, when's that tracker device gonna work; hopefully soon!
| AoideMythos 4/26/13 . chapter 7
OH MY GREEK GODS! I almost forgot about that tracking device! Lol, I'm probably not gonna be a detective in the future... XD
I hope Sea's plan works. I still wonder how the tracker works though...like press a button or something?
Update when you can! :-)
| AoideMythos 4/25/13 . chapter 6
Lol, I sort of know a Robert! H was someone who PMed me though! XD
I wonder what's Joanna thinking...I'm quite stumped here.
Update again when you can! :-)
| AoideMythos 4/22/13 . chapter 5
Hey, hey, hey! I'm reading! XD
I feel bad for what's happening now... Lydia's going through such a tough time. First, kidnapped. Second, pink hair that she didn't seem to like. And thirdly, getting slapped. What else is gonna happen,? They're gonna shave all her hair off or blind her?...Possibly not, since help is there!
Update soon, please!
| SapphireDragonHeart 4/22/13 . chapter 5
Are you trying out new accents, or something?
| AoideMythos 4/16/13 . chapter 4
There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but otherwise this was nice! :-)
Sorry for not checking my inbox, I would've read this sooner! XD
I can't believe James would give her pink hair! Pink hair isn't bad though, I just personally wouldn't want my hair changed to a different colour.
I wonder what the 'or else' part means. Like "Or else I'll treat you to dinner"? Lol, probably not, but don't blame me...I'm sort of hungry right now!
I hope no one else gets kidnapped...
| SapphireDragonHeart 4/13/13 . chapter 4
Really? Her hair's now pink?
| AoideMythos 12/8/12 . chapter 3
Oh my goodness...I have a feeling James is seriously gonna mess up her hair! Please, no, James!
| you know who Iam 12/8/12 . chapter 3
(didn't want to log in again!)
Text talk! don't use it!
| AoideMythos 8/31/12 . chapter 1
More chappies please! I wonder how's Lydia gonna get back home!
| AoideMythos 8/30/12 . chapter 2
You should keep writing! The suspense!
| TrixieDan123 8/18/12 . chapter 2
| TrixieDan123 8/18/12 . chapter 1
UH-OH! I feel so sorry Lydia!
| Anxious Axolotl 8/4/12 . chapter 1
I like how you started by leaping straight into the action, defiantly caught my attention. I think you need to fix a few grammatical errors, like [ She's my best friend!" I cry!], the second exclamation mark isn't necessary as the punctuation relating to the speech goes within the quotation marks. Also, [Jim and James that was my captors names.] should have plural 'were' instead of 'was'. I actually think that sentence could be a little more subtle, something like [I was finally free, but now I fear Jim and James have taken Lydia] maybe. There were a few other minor spelling mistakes too.
I hope the next chapter is longer, especially when swapping POVs. I was just starting to enjoy Sea's when it changed to Lydia's! You left on quite a cliffhanger, so I hope you update soon.