Damien is kind of full of himself, no offence to him. XD
And I can relate with the cough attacks, I hate bothering people in class with that, but I can't really do anything about it, right?
Damien sounds just a bit stalkerish, even though he doesn't want to. Seriously he thinks it's weird to walk up, then say "Hello. Did you know you have an amazing singing voice?" and he doesn't think watching her behind a bush or giving her his jacket and sitting beside her while she's asleep isn't strange?
Boys are so odd...

Oh, and keep writing, prease! XD

whoa...
sad but good thing she has great family and friends.
please keep writing, your a very good writer :)

you should keep writing!
"Flirtationship." Interesting...you make that up?

You should write more, I wanna know what happens next!
I really like your writing by the way!

This is really lovely. And done well. But I totally ahve to love that whole fruite basket part. Amazing job, keep it up :D

oh! contin!

I absolutely LOVE Fruits Basket! This is a pretty good story

This seems interesting. I'd like to know more about the death of her parents.

Your grammar can mess up in certain places like: "I grabbed my black glasses that were shaped like sunglasses," which should be "I grabbed my black glasses, which were shaped like sunglasses." Also, you switch tenses a lot. Stick to either past or present (:

Otherwise, you're doing well, and I'd like to read some more. Good luck, and keep writing! (: