I really like the line "it's bad enough to cross the line but then you dare to criticize" good song! Good job! :)

Please excuse this however this is where I tend to put in my own thoughts on things - I have NOT critisized anyone NOR have I ever intented to do so SERIOUSLY. I have NEVER/NOT ever critisized anyone also when I read I ONLY give compliments and a story is a story - it is up to the writer of the story how they chose to write it and/or the poem. I have ONLY written when I am confused. I ONLY ever mean well when I leave my reviews.

This song is very, very, very good! I'd love to hear it set to music. The lyrics are touching and they have meaning. Well done (: