Since your story is so short, it's a bit hard to say much about the plot and your style. I think it has a lot of potential and I'm defiantly curious about how the plot will unfold. I'd like to see a bit more description beyond physical traits, like what subjects does Alice enjoy, or does she hate school altogether? Don't forget to start a new line for every turn of dialogue, it will make you formatting look fabulous! I also think you might want someone to proofread this or run a spell check on it because it has a number of spelling mistakes.

Goodluck with the next chapter, I hope it's a bit longer because this ended too soon!