Love the image you bring up here! Unfortunately, nowadays wayyy too much attention goes to the shell (which is all too often the same) instead of the deeper layers inside each person, which, in my opinion, reach infinitely more deeper than any "surface map" could ever display. Perhaps it is difficult nowadays to see this, but the eyes of a person never lie. The sadness you can see in many people's eyes almost always melts away by a simple act of kindness. Anyhow, well done!

I liked this! Particularly the image of clones marching in the final line. I think your choice to apostrophe the s on girl's rather writing 'every girl is' is interesting. Apart from making structural sense in keeping with the 5.7.5 flow, without the apostrophe it would mean girls plural and so it adds emphasis to the idea of a faceless collective. Great job