I love the Shaman, he’s a great character and I’d like to see more of him! It’s interesting, how it’s all put together; a fascinating chain of events and a very entertaining story!

Can’t wait for the next (last?) part.

Your story is very intriguing and I was much impressed by the names you have come up with they are terrible tongue twisters. I really like how you write your dialogue, but would also like to have a little more detail about your characters, as I was reading, it was hard to imagine these people. Some more backstory would also better explain your world but overall I think you have a great story emerging from this world.