|Reviews for The McCallisters: Truth or Dare: December 2008|
| Dreamers-Requiem 2/24/13 . chapter 1
You could do with some more description sprinkled throughout this; it was quite hard to keep track, especially with so many characters, so maybe some reminders of who they were throughout would be useful. There seemed to be a lot going on, and in parts it fell to being a bit dialogue heavy, so maybe watch out for that if/when you come to edit this. On the whole, it was entertaining, but I felt some of that got a bit lost as I tried to keep track of them all. Hope that helps.
| Skyward Ending 8/21/12 . chapter 1
This was amusing, and you somehow pulled off the dialogue/action:thought/emotion ratio. Their questions and dares were very typical of teenagers. I especially liked the end. Prank calls are usually stupid but this one was silly and funny.
The number of people and names and stuff were quite difficult to keep up with. I also have no idea how old they are, so maybe clear that up?