I really like this, you have the flow and the words just right and you've written it as if it means the world to you (which it may well do, I don't know). I think poetry needs that very personal feel to it, which you have embraced fully (whereas I still have a lot to learn).

More people need to read poetry on this site, there are some real gems around and this is one of them (at least I think it is).

Silly. :)