I like how you pack simple sentences with profound meaning. In fact, I love it. I need it, to remind me that what you're doing is not impossible.

love this love love love it! :D

I don't understand this poem, but your imagery and use of language is incredible. 'i am the kind of natural that bruises on its way out of the ground.' is a wonderful line.

man your good...but i find my self constantly viewing the world with my weekend eyes!