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| Reviews for Sitting Straight |
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  having 12/31/12 . chapter 1 good |
 Beth Brooks 8/9/12 . chapter 1wow, very honest and deep piece, i enjoyed reading it, very realtiable! Good work! |
| thetabbykitteh 8/6/12 . chapter 1 Aw I too know how it feels to hide ur true self and feelings from the world. I wish sometimes I could tell people, but... |
| Lencionim 8/6/12 . chapter 1 Small grammar thing: "Lies is what put it to shame" should be "Lies [are] what put it to shame". I think this is a poem a lot of people can relate to. It sounded more like prose than poetry, but if that's what you were going for you did a good job of it. The only suggestion I can make is to tighten it a little; eliminate unneeded words. |
