This was the favorite of mine so far. I've been through what this poem is about, so I could really relate. It was raw and very emotional, and you captured perfectly how it feels to put your heart and soul into a relationship, even if you have to be beaten up for it.

You're an excellent writer!

The Reverse Edge Blade

I can relate to that.

This was deep! Very beautiful, and very emotional. Good job!

Reading this had made me think. Also, I will put my own thoughts into this for me YES I VERY MUCH DO CARE and things DO MATTER TO ME. I am NOT using anyone and I want to be with a person/a certain someone MORE than what that person realizes. TRUST ME I am wililng to change. I DON'T want the certain person to leave I DON'T if the person is okay with it - I NEED this person. What do I mean by this? I ONLY feel love from another person when I communicate on here. I ONLY feel love from this certain person/this certain someone.