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Because, I'm too lazy to log on to my account, I shall write to you as Belle. Well, you know that, already. I like Jonathan, he's cool. Toby, too. Chubs is snorting...AGAIN. He's a dog, for crying out loud! He's so...lazy. Not much can be said, other then,
This was a very well written chapter, and congratulations on your graduation. Rhymes, they're quite lovely, are they not?

Alright, first off, I love this story so much. It's so interesting. I love how you've really captured the doubts of some gays and the unsupportive parents. Your writing style really helps to make the story more entertaining and interesting. Also, there's a lot of suspense about who exactly killed Jonathon. Anyway, I hope to see another update soon. Keep up the good work.

This w s prety good! i hope they catch the kiler, and i rly hope its not Hajime! Th t would b so s d!

It is really more than okay that you weren't able to write until now. Please don't ever feel pressured to do so. Really. May things go well for you, so you no longer have writer's block. I must admit I do enjoy reading this because it is different. However I couldn't help but feel sad for Hajime as he could feel Jonathan and he wanted to know that he was there. It is sweet that Jonathan wants to protect him. It was a sad thought that Jonathan had thought about what his parents had said about being punished. And I didn't like that they said it to him. I don't think that they are right either. I just don't. I like that Toby wants to help Jonathan. Thank you for sharing this.

This story was quite to my liking.
BAAAATTLLLE ROOOOOOOAAACCCCHHH! FLY AWAY WITH YOUR PAPERY WINGS!

I love it, and I love Cody. Everyone else as well, just less.
* blows kiss to Cody *

Poor Jonathan! I think the murderer is Hajime... And Cody has a boyfriend! No? :o

This makes me sad to read. What do I mean? I would like for EVERY child in the world to be loved by their parents and FOR REAL with REAL LOVE. With the respect and love and support that a child needs. REALLY. I will also tell you that if I have a child someday I would SERIOUSLY LOVE the child that I would have. REALLY. I would love to encourage the child to be all that that he or she can be and to do what makes the child happy. If I had a son or a daughter and if I found out that they were gay or lesbian I would still love them. REALLY. Also, I would hope that if I did have kids and if they were gay or lesbian that they would just feel comfortable enough to tell me NOT to hide it. REALLY. Yes, even if the my son or daughter was bisexual. Why? Because a child should ALWAYS feel loved and supported. A child should NEVER/NOT ever feel worthless. REALLY.

If children are brought up with a TRUE sense of love and respect and therefore support. I would think that if children in this world aren't afraid to live and be themselves then the world as a whole would feel more connected. If children are loved and the parents show love and support. The family as a community - REALY there for each other. NOT out of fear out of LOVE AND RESPECT. REALLY.

Why did I type what I have? Because chldren DESERVE to feel love and protected with respect and support NOT fear and hatred. They DESERVE to know that they are NOT alone NOT to feel like they are alone. REALLY.

I don't like that Jonathan was killed however I do like that Toby is there for him and is trying to comfort him.

Very nice shady

All right, I guess I'll love my children.
Shit.
I don't have any.
How about a rain check?

Think it's a cool story! Don't stop updating!

Poor Hajime and Jonathan. This is so sad.
Hajime seems to suspect something about Toby... I hope he will ask him if he can see Jonathan, or Toby telling him that he can. Toby could be a link so the two boys can talk to each other :) Not that that will bring Jonathan back... :(
I highly doubt Martin is the killer. He's a jerk, though.
Oh, and just one thing... when you write a sentence someone says, you should have a [,] instead :

"Don't cry." he said.

should be:

"Don't cry," he said.

I liked this chapter, keep it up :)

I love Cody. He is my Favorite character. He is Just awesome. I loved him since chapter one.(And I will still love him throughout the whole story)
Love You Shady.
Hi:M,P,B
(Max,Polly and Ben)Love you guys too.