Very spiritual and deep with many layers to be read between the lines. I really like the way you transform a simple scene such as standing in the rain into a story about inner growth and all the struggles that comes along with it. Very profound and genuine. Great work I must say!

I like the title and the reference to mrytle in the first line simply because and random I know, but it instantly reminded me of Moaning Mrytle in Harry Potter lol. Which I don't think is entirely irrelevant as there's a secondary focus on water throughout the poem hehe.
The poem is beautifully written though, I especially like the lines about the cold rain cleansing and healing because the image is vivid and fresh. Loved it

Ceri from the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in profile)