|Reviews for Did You|
| Guest 3/27/13 . chapter 1
I don't know.
| misguided mania 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I liked your use of question marks, they added emphasis to the narrator’s longing and obvious need for answers as well as creating a recurring theme throughout the poem.
I didn't like the lack of punctuation every where else though as I think a few commas and full stops would have helped this flow a bit better.
Ceri from the Review Game’s Review Marathon (link in profile)