Dark as hell. I really liked this. Your language is simple, clear and concise which I love and you packed a real emotional punch. I like the idea that there is darkness in all of us, quite a complex concept and you conveyed it perfectly.

However I did feel that the last stanza was a great deal weaker than the ones previous. I get that a poem like this is hard to end but I thought it was a bit of a cop-out.

But like I said, I really liked this piece. Great job!