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| Reviews for Gods in Training |
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   MoonlightInTheMist 10/18/12 . chapter 26Yeesh, everyone is making such a big deal out of this. They're blowing it WAY out of proportion. |
| redandwhitetigers 10/17/12 . chapter 26 I love the last line! "Do you want a grape? I guarantee their freshness." Classic! Update soon! |
| CharissaKarn 10/14/12 . chapter 26 :D YEEEE this is awesome! :) I like Demi! :) ahah please update soon! :) |
| Nyx'sReincarnation 10/14/12 . chapter 26 Great chapter! Haha I love the last line! The situation's all dark and then he just has this bowl of grapes and ... LOL Keep up the awesome work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
| MoonlightInTheMist 10/11/12 . chapter 25 I liked this chapter a lot. the characters were so original. Thanks for switching Isis to Iris, by the way... |
| kc1690 10/10/12 . chapter 25 Wow! Janus is extremely annoying! And I love Khione! And Iris, though Rainbows is what she does, she seems feisty! Can't wait to see how they handle going to hell... |
| Guest 10/8/12 . chapter 25 i love this story penguins rock |
| CharissaKarn 10/8/12 . chapter 25 teehee! i love it! :D this is awesome! ahahaha :D please update again, soon! :D |
| Nyx'sReincarnation 10/8/12 . chapter 25 Haha awesome chapter! I love the whole thing with Janus and the choices and such... XD The only thing is, I noticed that you use the words "said" and "asked" a lot; maybe you could find more descriptive words like that. In stead of "asked", you could do "questioned" or "demanded" or "enquired" or maybe "wondered"... for "said", you could do "replied" (which I think you use), "responded", "declared", "expounded" which is like "explained", there are so many new options! XD wow I sound like my English teacher. *shudders* Anyway, keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
| redandwhitetigers 10/8/12 . chapter 25 I did not see Khione be a little girl. Didn't see it, but I did see Iris being tougher than you would think. |
| Ditto51 10/7/12 . chapter 1 Really good, but you should go over it for grammar and spelling |
| Nyx'sReincarnation 10/5/12 . chapter 24 Amazing chapter! I was cracking up. Rainbows and snowflakes... that's hilarious! XD Keep up the amazing work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
| Buddhist Warrior 10/4/12 . chapter 24 I'm rooting for Blade,gods(I can almost hear Thanatos correcting me.))of death kick ass. |
| redandwhitetigers 10/4/12 . chapter 24 Mars, those girls are better than you think. If you don't like the choice, think of a better idea with your stupid brain. Good chapter. It is getting intresting. |
| redandwhitetigers 10/4/12 . chapter 22 Who knew that an ear would help you make a decision? |
