I like the metaphor here. It's really original and it fits really well with the idea of ADD.

I also like the formatting. It does a create job to show the disjointed train of thought and then the more continuous train of thought.

I do wish there was more though about how the music helps and describing music more because without the summary I never would've known that's what the volume referred to.

PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile).

I love your creativity and metaphor like style. :)