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| simpleplan13 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I would bold the word "Windows" because otherwise it seems like the first line of the piece when I'm guessing it's actually the title.
I like the piece though. The idea is really interesting, really creative. I also like the "you know" it makes it really conversational.
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